Book Review | Before He Kills | Blake Pierce

 

Before he Kills (A Mackenzie White Mystery—Book 1)

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Blake Pierce is the USA Today bestselling author of the several mystery series with women detectives. The first book of every series is available as a free download on Amazon!

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Let’s meet the key characters.

Characters in “Before He Kills” by Blake Pierce

  • Mackenzie White – A young, determined, and ambitious Nebraska police officer aiming to prove herself in a male-dominated field. Driven by past trauma and a desire for justice, she is intuitive and passionate, though sometimes emotionally raw and impulsive.

  • Porter – Mackenzie’s dismissive and chauvinistic colleague, representing the professional resistance she faces as a woman in law enforcement. But he transforms slowly over the period of the story, and he saves Mackenzie in the climax. Oops! Spoiler alert.

  • The Killer – A shadowy, methodical murderer targeting women in chillingly similar ways, whose patterns Mackenzie tries to decode. He’s a religious psycho.

  • Ellington – An FBI agent introduced later in the novel. Experienced and calm, he becomes a mentor-like figure for Mackenzie and offers her a chance to join the FBI.

  • Police Chief Clark Nelson.– Mackenzie’s boss, who has mixed feelings about her methods but ultimately allows her to pursue the case. Mackenzie has a very tense face-off with him towards the end.

  • Mackenzie’s Father – A former detective whose past case continues to haunt Mackenzie and subtly influences her choices.

  • Victims – Several unnamed or briefly detailed women whose murders form the core of the investigation.

  • Zack – Mackenzie’s toxic boyfriend
  • Stephanie – Mackenzie’s estranged sister

Non-Spoiler Recap

“Before He Kills” introduces readers to Mackenzie White, a determined young detective working in the Nebraska police force, where she faces constant skepticism and sexism from her predominantly male colleagues. When the body of a young woman is found in a cornfield—killed in a manner suggesting ritual or pattern—Mackenzie suspects they’re dealing with a serial killer, but her concerns are initially dismissed by her boss and her team alike.

Drawing on her exceptional intuition and analytical skills, Mackenzie pursues the investigation despite resistance from her department. Her persistence catches the attention of FBI agents when similarities between this case and others emerge, suggesting the presence of a serial killer preying on young women across Nebraska.

As Mackenzie works to track down the “Scarecrow Killer,” she must also confront painful memories from her own past, particularly the unsolved murder of her father. These personal demons both drive her determination and sometimes cloud her judgment as the investigation intensifies. She also struggles with her manchild of a boyfriend Zack.

Some Highlights

  • “Good recall on that 1987 case,” Nelson told Mackenzie. It looked like it physically hurt him to pay her the compliment.
  • It was hard to peg Porter as a man who respected his wife that much and on such an account, she was happy to be proven wrong.
  • I’d go so far as to guess that he feels he’s doing the world a favor.”
  • a long shot is better than no shot at all.
  • Was small-town mentality that hard to break away from?
  • Sometimes the small-town mentality is hard to break out of.”
  • She looked out to the room and saw Porter sitting among the faces. He gave her a quick smile, almost like he wanted to ensure no one else saw it. It was probably the sweetest thing he’d ever done for her and she found that Porter was starting to surprise her at every turn.
  • Suddenly, Ellington’s suggestion of trying to get into the FBI seemed more appealing than ever.
  • The woman nodded and Mackenzie saw something broken in the woman’s eyes. The events of this night, no matter how they turned out, would traumatize this poor young woman for the rest of her life.

Review

Before He Kills introduces readers to Mackenzie White, a small-town police officer with big ambitions and a troubled past. Blake Pierce delivers a gripping and fast-paced procedural thriller with a young, female protagonist striving to break into a world that constantly underestimates her. The plot is well-paced, the tension is sustained throughout, and the mystery has enough twists to keep readers engaged. Mackenzie’s raw intensity and emotional investment make her relatable, even when her decisions seem impulsive.

The novel follows Mackenzie’s journey as she fights to be taken seriously in a hostile work environment while racing against time to prevent more killings. Her unique perspective and unconventional approach to the investigation may be exactly what’s needed to catch the killer, but they also make her a target for both departmental politics and potentially the killer himself.

That said, readers familiar with Pierce’s Avery Black series may find Mackenzie less compelling in comparison. While Avery is sharp and emotionally layered, Mackenzie at times comes across as whiny, especially in her repeated focus on being young and female in a “boy’s world.” Her trauma and strained relationship with her father add depth but don’t always translate into maturity.

Another minor frustration is the unresolved subplot involving the mysterious creaky floor in Mackenzie’s apartment—a thread that felt like it was leading somewhere but never paid off, leaving readers wondering if it was a red herring or a forgotten detail.

Despite these flaws, Before He Kills is a promising start to the Mackenzie White series. It’s a solid, entertaining read for fans of psychological thrillers and crime procedurals, especially those who appreciate flawed but determined female leads.

And that, I think, is the mark of a good series opener.

Rating: 4/5


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